Archive for February, 2008

notch - Appaloosa - piquant - deliberate - entomb - opium

I Remember You Said It Like This

by Erika
The joke was about
two young doctors entombed in an opium den –
One of them chokes on ice
and one of them mounts a horse naked –
a mottled Appaloosa with pretty hair.
You love that part.

It wasn’t wildly funny,
it was maybe just your voice,
the way it went up a notch –
piquant and deliberate
and about to split.

.

.

.

We Stay on the Trail
by Stephanie

We are listening to the Pet Shop Boys,
you lounging plumply on your Appaloosa,
and I on my Paint.
A deliberate yank of the reins,
and we squeak leather against leather, curling up the trail,
another notch up past the tree line.
Hooves brush unknowing against poppy buds,
their sultry layers of electric petals sit dewy and ready to shock,
their entombed opium laughs at how we look from so far below.
Soil smears on poly-cotton blend: piquant, wet, dark.

.

.

.

Tim Gunn

by Evelyn

Tim Gunn says
‘this will never
work, you have
to lose that
acrylic Appaloosa
it’s hideous. Make
a notch and entomb
it in silk just get it
out of here it
reminds me of
cowboys and that
look’s so deliberate
and overdone
like that brand
Piquant Opium.’

.

.

.

prelude to the purchase of opium

by Adam

some jonesing cowpoke moseys up to the bar
saloon doors swinging behind ‘em entomb
the appaloosa he rode in on

furtively surveys the dim room
deliberate glances into the dimmest notch
to see a man about a horse

procures a beer and retires to a table
near a darkened corner opposite
bent like a beaten dead horse

a brief exchange with the guy at the table
he gets up wearing a big waxy coat
they make like trees and leave into the piquant evening

.

.

.

Untitled

by Abby

We pass exit 387B, Tulsa business loop

and I run my fingers absentmindedly over the notches in the AC vent, entombed in the passenger seat.

You sit behind the wheel for the eternity of another four states.

You guessed the last word in eighteen questions. It was opium.

I put in a cd to fill the air for another 100 miles, it was the black and white one.

Several songs in, you ask why he named it Appaloosa, and give me a piquant glance.

I give back a deliberate little chuckle before i realize it wasn’t a joke.

.

.

.

The Ivory buck

By Carla

tsing, tsing, tsingĀ  bright and sharp sound
punctuating a street filled with deliberate speed
and grace - bright tall china air ladies twirl creating swaths of sex, color
very controlled easy to read the message - easy to tell the story

piquant pikachus pirouette
richly notched wood rests ready to be rubbed by the smooth hands of streetvendors
this is too easy - is it a dream

sweet smells rest on the ground and opium is my middle mane
appaloosa rugs clap once returning, entombing me in silence

crummy - neti pot - sleeve - caked - note

slowly draw the cloth out of your throat and over your eyes
by Adam G.
experiments with the neti pot have led
closer to senses than solutions

hypertonicity may be more effective
in relieving syndromes characterized by
dried mucus caked into upper respiratory cavities
crummy lung volume
in comparison to previous measurements
uncontrollable wiping of the nose with the sleeve
sniveling, wretchedness, intemperance

some of these symptoms may be relived by
exercises familiar to those versed in
circular breathing
employing circular logic
calculating elliptic orbits

in the case of impeded flow
note that sutra neti may
remove some minor blockages

.

.

.

MB
by Carla
soured homey slightly crossed eyes dwelling in a place,
parameters felt but not seen crummy fault lines in fonzies face
hollow sleeves hover between cakes and precise crabbily cobbled notes
nothing new netty pot nothing new

.

.

.

Gifted!

by Erika
The neti pot you gave me for Christmas
is caked in mucous.
I wipe it with the sleeve of my anorak
and leave you a note on wax paper
next to the snot pot:
“Thanks for all the crummy dreams.”

.

.

.

comfort extender

by Evelyn

the need for a neti pot is comforting because it’s optimistic
that’s optimistic with ice cream caked around it
and like a hip’s hump of flesh
and the negative part of thought/not thought
cross-sectioning a hip is explanatory
and not like pulling on a sleeve to get what you want
from the parent conduit
every parent should promise never to die in a note
that leaves everyone with something crummy to read
something adult
like the word ‘intersection’

.

.

.

Something Happened on the Hillside

by Stephanie
your crummy little note scribbled on the back of a receipt,
which fell from the wormy hand poking from the end of my sleeve,
is drifting across the open plains,
majestically brushing the bark of elm,
becoming caked in the dung of elk,
and finally disbursing its pulp like snowflakes in the salty water
of the pond from which I scoop sparkling water for my neti pot.

.

.

.

The fucking plague

by Alexis

My house is a symphony of sickness
Not even a netti pot built for giants can clear these caked pipes
I shamed by my contagious nature,
and forced to wear a note on my sleeve reading C
I should have gotten the flu shot.

.

.

.

untitled

by Adam Lee

crummy sleeve of the world
slips away
gently

indulging in the netti pot
of the mind

past memories caking my thoughts
break suddenly free

i should leave a note before
i am too far
gone

scroll - igloo - bastion - colander - knob

Procrastination Leads to Cooking

by Adam Lee

Colander glints warily,
hot noodles breath a sigh of relief.
The grimy knobs of my range reflect the
hot spattering of oil.
A few garlic cloves,
the last bastions in my
igloo-like fridge.
Scrolling through the recipe
in my mind;
black bean sauce
and some chicken broth.
After steaming, finally…
I taste.

.

.

.

Untitled

by Alexis

I live in an igloo and I ride a fixed gear,
Wouldn’t you like to know how I roll.
The answer is simple I live by the scroll
Some question my faith,
But my bastion is solid as ice
Oh shit fire is seeping through my colander
I’m reaching for the knob
The control key is lost
It is all melting.
Tersely
Against the parchment
Maybe I need a new ride.

.

.

.

The Great Screen Scrape

by Adam

I click on the subjects of the emails until the screen is long
then I grab the contracted little knob on the scroll bar and scroll
past jungles and deserts and other landforms
scrolling to Antarctica and a flock of huddled penguins
scrolling to Greenland and an igloo village
the scroll bar jogs the length of the great wall of China
the bastion of distance become transparent as a colander

.

.

.

Untitled

by Carla

bobble bobble bastion blunder
colander coil and igloo bubble
add three knobs of newt, two possum teats
and a scroll that says something stupid
the end

.

.

.

- Whistler’s Mother -

by Erika

Hold the hag’s hair back
as she spurts into the colander and it seeps out the cracks.

Beat the bastion of hot men
holdings scrolls rolled into cylinders, burned black.

Turn the slick knob
with a sodden hand,
wipe the gristle on the wall,
next to the igloo plaque.

.

.

.

Common household objects

by Evelyn

I scroll down.

There’s more advice:
make an igloo
with an upside-down colander!

A knob
does make a closed door
believable!

There’s a bastion
in the common.

.

.

.

Some Places Get So Cold That Your Tears Freeze Before They Leave Their Ducts

by Stephanie

The knob had popped off the dresser that day
and rolled around and around the floor of the igloo.
Gurgling and lonesome against the dirt in the fluorescent cool.

A day that was dainty and strange — elastic and dull.

Two of the girls slipped through the holes in the colander,
while their father sat on a pile of pelts in his bastion
scrolling through pages and pages of eBay feedback.